kaelims+novel+studies

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**FEEDBACK** Kaelim you were an effective Director. Your questions on a presentation slide are good and relate to the chapters that you have read. Your group were able to answer them. An area to focus next time you are asking questions from a novel is trying to pose questions that go beyond the text.

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** FEEDBACK **
 * Kaelim, thank you for the effort you have put into your summary. Remember when we were looking at the CARS strategies, a summary was working out the most important event (in the chapters) and putting them into your summary. In your summary you have over written a little bit and covered nearly every thing that happened in the chapters.
 * Think about your page display and what should be the boldest. Font size.
 * Proof reading, paragraphs and editing.
 * Next step, work on presenting a piece that is well thought out, mets the requirements and polished.